I tried
For the past four months
all I did was try and try
to be the poet expected of me
But I am not Walt Whitman
I had stanzas and lines from the heart
my emotions and feelings brought out
it showed my own creativity
But I am not Walt Whitman
I tried using the figurative language
like metaphors and similes
while staying away from abstractions
But I am not Walt Whitman
I tried using descriptions and sentiment
my sentimental words were my best
make sure to show not tell
But I am not Walt Whitman
I tried making them musically pleasing
Assonance and Consonance confuse me
I deliberately added Anaphora Alliteration
But I am not Walt Whitman
I tried so hard to make it Rhyme
End, Internal, Slant Oh my!
Every song time I used them
But I am not Walt Whitman
I tried perfecting the Poetic Meter of Prosody
incorporating meter and foot
playing with Accentual Syllabic Verse
But I am not Walt Whitman
I tried a variety of forms presented
I thought my sonnet was great
and my Haikus superb
But I am not Walt Whitman
I even tried a Villanelle
Choosing my words carefully
taking the time to perfect
But I am not Walt Whitman
Now four months later and still
I tried
and tried
But I am not Walt Whitman
Hi!! I liked how you wrote a poem about your experience in this class, I was able to relate well to it! I also like your humorous take on attempting different poetic devices and including them in the poem itself!! I especially liked "consonance confuse me" and "i deliberately added anaphora alliteration"- its really cool how you use the poetic devices while talking about your struggling to use those poetic devices. The ending lines for each of the stanzas worked well in establishing the rhythm of the poem but I think they gave the poem an overall vibe of "not being as good as walt whitman" - the line could be used in many different ways, and I think it would be interesting to use it in a way that says something with a different message- maybe that you found a certain style that isn't similar to walt whitman at all, and that could be a positive thing. Nice poem!!
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